Added ⚡️ content to `Onboarding` > `Protecting a wallet` by GBKS · Pull Request #537 · BitcoinDesign/Guide

GBKS · 2021-10-22T13:59:47Z

See #517 for a discussion of the changes.

Keeping this in draft mode for now as I am still working on things.

Add security and privacy checklist concept
Add info about pro-actively supporting users
Add wallet limit concept
Revise existing images for consistency
See if adding option to delete the recovery phrase makes sense
See if adding option for a dummy PIN to show fake data makes sense
Clarify scope of the page in the intro
Look for cross-linking opportunities
Overall copy review

Review notes
The page has gotten quite long, as 11 different techniques are described. The new categories help a bit, but I am still wondering if we shouldn't condense a bit further.

Added new paragraphs about - Security & privacy checklist - Progressive security - Wallet limits Also revised images, layout and captions overall for consistency. Next step will be to revise overall copy.

- Images for feature details, fake wallet PIN choice, and deleting a recovery phrase - Restructured the page into clearer sections, with a table of contents at the top - Copy review for consistency and clarity

Bosch-0

Great stuff @GBKS! Looking good, left a few comments but nothing major.

Co-authored-by: bosch <55287964+Bosch-0@users.noreply.github.com>

Bosch-0 · 2021-10-27T06:35:09Z

Something we haven't discussed in this section, which I think is relevant, is networking privacy.

We should be recommending all wallets have a connect over Tor option or just have Tor by default. It becomes very important when you introduce LSPs into the mix.

Co-authored-by: bosch <55287964+Bosch-0@users.noreply.github.com>

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In #537, more Settings screens were added that have a very faint background grey color. This results in super low contrast where the screens almost blends with the background. This tweak makes the gallery background very slightly darker and the box-shadow slightly stronger for better contrast.

sbddesign

🎉 Good content!

I left you some nit-picky grammar fixes. Many are based on rules of grammar, but some are just my opinion regarding writing style.

Co-authored-by: Stephen DeLorme <stephen@stephendelorme.com>

Co-authored-by: Daniel Nordh <3393669+danielnordh@users.noreply.github.com> Co-authored-by: Stephen DeLorme <stephen@stephendelorme.com>

Co-authored-by: Stephen DeLorme <stephen@stephendelorme.com>

pavlenex

Great work, LGTM. 🚀

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WiP first updates to the 2Protecting a wallet" page
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Added new paragraphs about - Security & privacy checklist - Progressive security - Wallet limits Also revised images, layout and captions overall for consistency. Next step will be to revise overall copy.

GBKS added Copy Task is about improving text. Design Task is about designing something. Onboarding labels Oct 22, 2021

GBKS added this to the Milestone #9 milestone Oct 22, 2021

GBKS self-assigned this Oct 22, 2021

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Add ⚡️ content to Onboarding > Protecting a wallet#517
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Rogelio165 previously approved these changes Oct 24, 2021
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Additional images, restructure and revision
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- Images for feature details, fake wallet PIN choice, and deleting a recovery phrase - Restructured the page into clearer sections, with a table of contents at the top - Copy review for consistency and clarity

GBKS dismissed Rogelio165’s stale review via 6309a89October 25, 2021 12:46

GBKS marked this pull request as ready for review October 25, 2021 12:53

Added ref to Blue Wallet for plausible deniability
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