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docs(guide/displaying-data): proofread - #1819

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  • TS prose updated to include @kwalrath's revisions from a while ago, with some of my edits as well.
  • Dart prose simplified by removing discussion of "additions to pubspec.yaml" which are no longer necessary given the current state of QuickStart.
  • E2e suites passed:
    • public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/dart
    • public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts

Contributes to #1598 and #1508.
Depends on #1818.

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@Foxandxss@wardbell@kwalrath : ready for review. As usual, it is best viewed by ignoring whitespace diffs.

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TS part works for me.

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chalinforce-pushed the chalin-guide-disp-data-0702 branch from d653f20 to 13e7e07CompareJuly 4, 2016 21:16
* declares a constructor parameter and its type
* declares a public property of the same name
* initializes that property with the corresponding argument when we "new" an instance of the class
+makeExcerpt('app/hero.ts ()', 'id')

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What does the () in here?

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Because of the () the mixin will render the title as app/hero.ts (excerpt).

* [Showing !{_an} !{_array} property with NgFor](#ngFor)
* [Conditional display with NgIf](#ngIf)

<li if-docs="ts">only ts</li>

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Why is this line here? This shows up as a weird "only ts" bullet item in the TS version of the docs...

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That was just for a test. It should not have been left in (no sure how it slipped by). Thanks for catching it!

Fixed.

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I did a side-by-side comparison, and apart from the couple of minor things I commented on, LGTM.

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chalinforce-pushed the chalin-guide-disp-data-0702 branch from db70c41 to 13fe33fCompareJuly 7, 2016 19:26
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Fixed and committed.

chalin added 3 commits July 7, 2016 12:30
- Dart prose simplified by removing discussion of "additions to
pubspec.yaml" which are no longer necessary given the current state of
QuickStart.
- E2e suites passed:
public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/dart
public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts
Contributes to angular#1598 and angular#1508.
- TS prose updated to include @kwalrath's revisions from a while ago,
with some of my edits as well.
- E2e suites passed:
public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/dart
public/docs/_examples/displaying-data/ts
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chalinforce-pushed the chalin-guide-disp-data-0702 branch from 13fe33f to 1fb1df4CompareJuly 7, 2016 19:30
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LGTM

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kwalrath merged commit 801ac76 into angular:masterJul 7, 2016
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chalin deleted the chalin-guide-disp-data-0702 branch July 7, 2016 21:10
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