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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'
line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.
lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference
line 39: add comma after 'management'
line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list
line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two

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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'
line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.
lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference
line 39: add comma after 'management'
line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list
line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'

line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.

lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference

line 39: add comma after 'management'

line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list

line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.
lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference
line 39: add comma after 'management'
line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list
line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'

line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.

lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference

line 39: add comma after 'management'

line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list

line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'
line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.
lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference
line 39: add comma after 'management'
line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list
line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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m.addedNodes.forEach(function(node) {
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'

line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.

lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference

line 39: add comma after 'management'

line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list

line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'
line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.
lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference
line 39: add comma after 'management'
line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list
line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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'fbclid', 'gclid', 'dclid', 'msclkid', 'yclid',
'ref', 'ref_src', 'source', 'medium', 'campaign'];
function cleanUrl(url) {
try {
var u = new URL(url, window.location.origin);
var changed = false;
trackingParams.forEach(function(p) {
if (u.searchParams.has(p)) {
u.searchParams.delete(p);
changed = true;
}
});
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} catch (e) {
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}
}
function cleanLinks() {
document.querySelectorAll('a[href]').forEach(function(a) {
var clean = cleanUrl(a.href);
if (clean !== a.href) a.href = clean;
});
}
cleanLinks();
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mutations.forEach(function(m) {
m.addedNodes.forEach(function(node) {
if (node.nodeType === 1) {
if (node.tagName === 'A') cleanLinks();
node.querySelectorAll('a[href]').forEach(function(a) {
var clean = cleanUrl(a.href);
if (clean !== a.href) a.href = clean;
});
}
});
});
});
observer.observe(document.body, { childList: true, subtree: true });
})();
}
} catch(__e) { console.warn('[Userscript:Remove Tracking Parameters from Links]', __e); }
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line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.

lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference

line 39: add comma after 'management'

line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list

line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'
line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.
lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference
line 39: add comma after 'management'
line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list
line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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if (__m === '*' || __re.test(location.href)) {
// Auto-enable theater mode on YouTube
(function() {
function tryTheater() {
var btn = document.querySelector('button[aria-label="Theater mode"], ytd-player #player button[title="Theater mode"]');
if (btn && !btn.classList.contains('activated')) {
btn.click();
}
}
// Try immediately
tryTheater();
// Try after navigation (SPA)
var lastUrl = location.href;
setInterval(function() {
if (location.href !== lastUrl) {
lastUrl = location.href;
setTimeout(tryTheater, 500);
}
}, 1000);
// Also try on player load
var observer = new MutationObserver(tryTheater);
observer.observe(document.body, { childList: true, subtree: true });
})();
}
} catch(__e) { console.warn('[Userscript:YouTube Theater Mode Default]', __e); }
})();
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'

line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.

lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference

line 39: add comma after 'management'

line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list

line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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Update atr-design-doc.md minor text changes to improve readability
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'
line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.
lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference
line 39: add comma after 'management'
line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list
line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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// Remove or un-stick sticky/fixed headers that block content
(function() {
function unstick() {
document.querySelectorAll('header, nav, [role="banner"], .header, .navbar, .sticky, .fixed-top, [style*="position: fixed"], [style*="position:sticky"]').forEach(function(el) {
if (el.style.position === 'fixed' || el.style.position === 'sticky' || getComputedStyle(el).position === 'fixed' || getComputedStyle(el).position === 'sticky') {
el.style.position = 'static';
el.style.top = 'auto';
el.style.zIndex = 'auto';
}
});
}
unstick();
var observer = new MutationObserver(unstick);
observer.observe(document.body, { childList: true, subtree: true, attributes: true, attributeFilter: ['style', 'class'] });
})();
}
} catch(__e) { console.warn('[Userscript:Kill Sticky Headers]', __e); }
})();
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try {
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'

line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.

lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference

line 39: add comma after 'management'

line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list

line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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Update atr-design-doc.md minor text changes to improve readability
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'
line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.
lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference
line 39: add comma after 'management'
line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list
line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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, 'i');
if (__m === '*' || __re.test(location.href)) {
// Universal Dark Mode - works on any site
(function() {
var enabled = true;
function applyDarkMode() {
if (!enabled) return;
// Create style element if it doesn't exist
var style = document.getElementById('universal-dark-mode-style');
if (!style) {
style = document.createElement('style');
style.id = 'universal-dark-mode-style';
document.head.appendChild(style);
}
// Dark mode CSS - inverts colors but preserves images/video
style.textContent = '
/* Invert everything except media */
html {
filter: invert(1) hue-rotate(180deg) !important;
background: #1a1a2e !important;
}
/* Restore images, videos, iframes, canvas */
img, video, iframe, canvas, svg, picture, [style*="background-image"] {
filter: invert(1) hue-rotate(180deg) !important;
}
/* Preserve specific elements that should not be inverted */
.no-dark-mode, .no-dark-mode *,
[data-theme="light"], [data-theme="light"],
.ace_editor, .ace_editor *,
.CodeMirror, .CodeMirror *,
.monaco-editor, .monaco-editor *,
.markdown-body pre, .markdown-body pre *,
.highlight, .highlight *,
pre code, pre code * {
filter: none !important;
}
/* Fix common UI elements */
.modal, .popup, .dropdown-menu, .tooltip, .popover {
filter: invert(1) hue-rotate(180deg) !important;
background: #2d2d44 !important;
border-color: #444 !important;
}
/* Scrollbars */
::-webkit-scrollbar { background: #1a1a2e !important; }
::-webkit-scrollbar-thumb { background: #444 !important; }
::-webkit-scrollbar-thumb:hover { background: #555 !important; }
/* Selection */
::selection { background: #4ecdc4 !important; color: #1a1a2e !important; }
::-moz-selection { background: #4ecdc4 !important; color: #1a1a2e !important; }
';
}
function removeDarkMode() {
var style = document.getElementById('universal-dark-mode-style');
if (style) style.remove();
}
// Toggle with Alt+Shift+D
document.addEventListener('keydown', function(e) {
if (e.altKey && e.shiftKey && e.key === 'D') {
e.preventDefault();
enabled = !enabled;
if (enabled) {
applyDarkMode();
console.log('[Universal Dark Mode] Enabled');
} else {
removeDarkMode();
console.log('[Universal Dark Mode] Disabled');
}
}
});
// Apply on load
applyDarkMode();
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Update atr-design-doc.md minor text changes to improve readability by cottage14 · Pull Request #95 · apache/tooling-docs · GitHub
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'

line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.

lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference

line 39: add comma after 'management'

line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list

line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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line 4: change 'the' to 'its'
line 16: I think this line should explain how PMCs benefit, or be removed. The blank statement without explanation is not supportable.
lines 21-28: so much bold text can make the material harder to read, not easier. Maybe only bold-face an acronym on its first reference
line 39: add comma after 'management'
line 41: change 'tracking' to 'track' to match the verb forms in the rest of this list
line 71: I believe 'runbook' is a single word, not two
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