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Refactoring Service Discovery Concept text - #215

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closes#86

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fhennig marked this pull request as ready for review June 16, 2022 12:10

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Some ideas

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Puh, writing docs is hard. I made some suggestions mostly related to form not content.

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I've added a first paragraph that already gives an overview, I've moved a lot of text into a "Motivation" section to clarify that. I've added some more details to the usage, in an effort to make it clearer. The second sub-paragraph under usage could probably use an example, but I couldn't come up with a good, compact example.

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lgtm

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fhennig merged commit 14f3a3d into mainJun 23, 2022
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