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Ang, this is excellent!! I really enjoyed reading it, and I hadn't realised there were all these fascinating people at the Turing. Your blog post helped me find out there was someone else you work with who has a background in autism research, which is cool to know!

Sorry for my very pernickety comments. They are very minor. Just correcting some grammar and spelling. The main one is when you use 'the' and 'a' or 'an' - in general, I'd use 'the' in front of any noun, when you expect the reader to know exactly what you are referring to (even if only by context), e.g. "the Turing Institute" or "the University of Cambridge", and "a" in front of any other noun beginning with a consonant, and "an" for ones beginning with a vowel. There are some exceptions, but this holds most of the time. English can be so totally erratic - your blog is actually very well written and clear so just a few minor points to make it perfect!

Well done ⭐ 🌟 👍

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Just realise this isn't clear - I mean change "I knew him" to "I know him" (I don't actually know him, although he sounds interesting so I wish I did!)

Bo Wang is a visiting researcher at Turing and work with Professor Terry Lyons based at Oxford.
I knew him because he is one of the organizers for Data science for mental health, an interest group aiming
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I recommend you change the following:
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patients. His work is very meaningful and helps many depressive patients to start a new life without the risk of
suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
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cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
cool and aims to identify the depression patients who would be most likely to respond to this surgery and find the

suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
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optimal surgery target for each individual, involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also

investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus could be useful to apply

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believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus could be useful to apply
believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus it could be useful to apply

cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus could be useful to apply
this surgery for all patients who had a strong desire of suicide. I really love his ideas and hope he can move this

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this surgery to all patients who have strong suicidal urges. I really love his ideas and hope he can move this


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Bo Wang is a visiting researcher at Turing and work with Professor Terry Lyons based at Oxford.
I knew him because he is one of the organizers for Data science for mental health, an interest group aiming
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suicide. However, some of the patients tend to respond more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further

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@sparkler0323 - why are some of these reviews marked resolved when they aren't updated yet?

Please also update from master because I've fixed the Travis continuous integration and so it will now actually tell you something useful (rather than break all the time)!

Ping me in the slack channel when you've addressed @GeorgiaHCA's points and I'll have a read through ✨

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@KirstieJane So sorry, as I couldn't find out how to make an edit inside this pull request. Should I close this pull request and re-edit it in my Github?

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Thanks Georgia, your review is super helpful and I have fixed the grammatical mistakes based on them!

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@sparkler0323 - I can only see a couple of sentences on separate lines - can you please go through the blog post and put them all on separate lines for me to review?

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Hi @sparkler0323! I've fixed the broken links in the master branch - please can you update your branch so that CI passes?

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Pinging again - I'd like to get this blog post merged - its been open for 2 months.

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Ang, this is excellent!! I really enjoyed reading it, and I hadn't realised there were all these fascinating people at the Turing. Your blog post helped me find out there was someone else you work with who has a background in autism research, which is cool to know!

Sorry for my very pernickety comments. They are very minor. Just correcting some grammar and spelling. The main one is when you use 'the' and 'a' or 'an' - in general, I'd use 'the' in front of any noun, when you expect the reader to know exactly what you are referring to (even if only by context), e.g. "the Turing Institute" or "the University of Cambridge", and "a" in front of any other noun beginning with a consonant, and "an" for ones beginning with a vowel. There are some exceptions, but this holds most of the time. English can be so totally erratic - your blog is actually very well written and clear so just a few minor points to make it perfect!

Well done ⭐ 🌟 👍

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Just realise this isn't clear - I mean change "I knew him" to "I know him" (I don't actually know him, although he sounds interesting so I wish I did!)

Bo Wang is a visiting researcher at Turing and work with Professor Terry Lyons based at Oxford.
I knew him because he is one of the organizers for Data science for mental health, an interest group aiming
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I recommend you change the following:
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patients. His work is very meaningful and helps many depressive patients to start a new life without the risk of
suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the

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cool and aims to identify the depression patients who would be most likely to respond to this surgery and find the

suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
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optimal surgery target for each individual, involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also

investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus could be useful to apply

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believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus it could be useful to apply

cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus could be useful to apply
this surgery for all patients who had a strong desire of suicide. I really love his ideas and hope he can move this

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this surgery to all patients who have strong suicidal urges. I really love his ideas and hope he can move this


## Alex Campbell
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Bo Wang is a visiting researcher at Turing and work with Professor Terry Lyons based at Oxford.
I knew him because he is one of the organizers for Data science for mental health, an interest group aiming
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suicide. However, some of the patients tend to respond more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further

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@sparkler0323 - why are some of these reviews marked resolved when they aren't updated yet?

Please also update from master because I've fixed the Travis continuous integration and so it will now actually tell you something useful (rather than break all the time)!

Ping me in the slack channel when you've addressed @GeorgiaHCA's points and I'll have a read through ✨

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Thanks Georgia, your review is super helpful and I have fixed the grammatical mistakes based on them!

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Well done! 🚀

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@sparkler0323 - I can only see a couple of sentences on separate lines - can you please go through the blog post and put them all on separate lines for me to review?

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Hi @sparkler0323! I've fixed the broken links in the master branch - please can you update your branch so that CI passes?

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Pinging again - I'd like to get this blog post merged - its been open for 2 months.

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Hi @KirstieJane, it will be great if you can help me the error. I have updated your master to my Github repository and I'm not sure why the merge fails. Thanks for your time!

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Hi @sparkler0323! If you click on the "Details" link next to the Travis CI you can see what the error is - in this case its that it's a broken link in a different blog post - I can fix that 😄

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Ang, this is excellent!! I really enjoyed reading it, and I hadn't realised there were all these fascinating people at the Turing. Your blog post helped me find out there was someone else you work with who has a background in autism research, which is cool to know!

Sorry for my very pernickety comments. They are very minor. Just correcting some grammar and spelling. The main one is when you use 'the' and 'a' or 'an' - in general, I'd use 'the' in front of any noun, when you expect the reader to know exactly what you are referring to (even if only by context), e.g. "the Turing Institute" or "the University of Cambridge", and "a" in front of any other noun beginning with a consonant, and "an" for ones beginning with a vowel. There are some exceptions, but this holds most of the time. English can be so totally erratic - your blog is actually very well written and clear so just a few minor points to make it perfect!

Well done ⭐ 🌟 👍

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Just realise this isn't clear - I mean change "I knew him" to "I know him" (I don't actually know him, although he sounds interesting so I wish I did!)

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patients. His work is very meaningful and helps many depressive patients to start a new life without the risk of
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suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
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cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
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optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus could be useful to apply
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this surgery to all patients who have strong suicidal urges. I really love his ideas and hope he can move this


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I knew him because he is one of the organizers for Data science for mental health, an interest group aiming
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suicide. However, some of the patients tend to respond more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further

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@sparkler0323 - why are some of these reviews marked resolved when they aren't updated yet?

Please also update from master because I've fixed the Travis continuous integration and so it will now actually tell you something useful (rather than break all the time)!

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@KirstieJane So sorry, as I couldn't find out how to make an edit inside this pull request. Should I close this pull request and re-edit it in my Github?

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Hi @sparkler0323 - if you make changes in your repository's master branch the pull request will automatically update ✨ Ping @GeorgiaHCA or @minnieho1115 in the slack channel if you're having any difficulties 😄

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Thanks Georgia, your review is super helpful and I have fixed the grammatical mistakes based on them!

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Well done! 🚀

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@sparkler0323 - I can only see a couple of sentences on separate lines - can you please go through the blog post and put them all on separate lines for me to review?

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Hi @sparkler0323! I've fixed the broken links in the master branch - please can you update your branch so that CI passes?

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Pinging again - I'd like to get this blog post merged - its been open for 2 months.

Let me know if you have any questions about updating the branch @sparkler0323.

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Hi @KirstieJane, it will be great if you can help me the error. I have updated your master to my Github repository and I'm not sure why the merge fails. Thanks for your time!

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Hi @sparkler0323! If you click on the "Details" link next to the Travis CI you can see what the error is - in this case its that it's a broken link in a different blog post - I can fix that 😄

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Ang, this is excellent!! I really enjoyed reading it, and I hadn't realised there were all these fascinating people at the Turing. Your blog post helped me find out there was someone else you work with who has a background in autism research, which is cool to know!

Sorry for my very pernickety comments. They are very minor. Just correcting some grammar and spelling. The main one is when you use 'the' and 'a' or 'an' - in general, I'd use 'the' in front of any noun, when you expect the reader to know exactly what you are referring to (even if only by context), e.g. "the Turing Institute" or "the University of Cambridge", and "a" in front of any other noun beginning with a consonant, and "an" for ones beginning with a vowel. There are some exceptions, but this holds most of the time. English can be so totally erratic - your blog is actually very well written and clear so just a few minor points to make it perfect!

Well done ⭐ 🌟 👍

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patients. His work is very meaningful and helps many depressive patients to start a new life without the risk of
suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
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suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
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cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
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believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus could be useful to apply
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this surgery to all patients who have strong suicidal urges. I really love his ideas and hope he can move this


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@sparkler0323 - why are some of these reviews marked resolved when they aren't updated yet?

Please also update from master because I've fixed the Travis continuous integration and so it will now actually tell you something useful (rather than break all the time)!

Ping me in the slack channel when you've addressed @GeorgiaHCA's points and I'll have a read through ✨

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Thanks Georgia, your review is super helpful and I have fixed the grammatical mistakes based on them!

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Ang, this is excellent!! I really enjoyed reading it, and I hadn't realised there were all these fascinating people at the Turing. Your blog post helped me find out there was someone else you work with who has a background in autism research, which is cool to know!

Sorry for my very pernickety comments. They are very minor. Just correcting some grammar and spelling. The main one is when you use 'the' and 'a' or 'an' - in general, I'd use 'the' in front of any noun, when you expect the reader to know exactly what you are referring to (even if only by context), e.g. "the Turing Institute" or "the University of Cambridge", and "a" in front of any other noun beginning with a consonant, and "an" for ones beginning with a vowel. There are some exceptions, but this holds most of the time. English can be so totally erratic - your blog is actually very well written and clear so just a few minor points to make it perfect!

Well done ⭐ 🌟 👍

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Just realise this isn't clear - I mean change "I knew him" to "I know him" (I don't actually know him, although he sounds interesting so I wish I did!)

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I knew him because he is one of the organizers for Data science for mental health, an interest group aiming
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patients. His work is very meaningful and helps many depressive patients to start a new life without the risk of
suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
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suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
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optimal surgery target for each individual, involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also

investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
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believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus it could be useful to apply

cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus could be useful to apply
this surgery for all patients who had a strong desire of suicide. I really love his ideas and hope he can move this

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this surgery to all patients who have strong suicidal urges. I really love his ideas and hope he can move this


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Bo Wang is a visiting researcher at Turing and work with Professor Terry Lyons based at Oxford.
I knew him because he is one of the organizers for Data science for mental health, an interest group aiming
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suicide. However, some of the patients tend to respond more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further

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@sparkler0323 - why are some of these reviews marked resolved when they aren't updated yet?

Please also update from master because I've fixed the Travis continuous integration and so it will now actually tell you something useful (rather than break all the time)!

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Hi @sparkler0323 - if you make changes in your repository's master branch the pull request will automatically update ✨ Ping @GeorgiaHCA or @minnieho1115 in the slack channel if you're having any difficulties 😄

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Thanks Georgia, your review is super helpful and I have fixed the grammatical mistakes based on them!

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Well done! 🚀

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@sparkler0323 - I can only see a couple of sentences on separate lines - can you please go through the blog post and put them all on separate lines for me to review?

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Hi @sparkler0323! I've fixed the broken links in the master branch - please can you update your branch so that CI passes?

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Pinging again - I'd like to get this blog post merged - its been open for 2 months.

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Hi @sparkler0323! If you click on the "Details" link next to the Travis CI you can see what the error is - in this case its that it's a broken link in a different blog post - I can fix that 😄

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Ang, this is excellent!! I really enjoyed reading it, and I hadn't realised there were all these fascinating people at the Turing. Your blog post helped me find out there was someone else you work with who has a background in autism research, which is cool to know!

Sorry for my very pernickety comments. They are very minor. Just correcting some grammar and spelling. The main one is when you use 'the' and 'a' or 'an' - in general, I'd use 'the' in front of any noun, when you expect the reader to know exactly what you are referring to (even if only by context), e.g. "the Turing Institute" or "the University of Cambridge", and "a" in front of any other noun beginning with a consonant, and "an" for ones beginning with a vowel. There are some exceptions, but this holds most of the time. English can be so totally erratic - your blog is actually very well written and clear so just a few minor points to make it perfect!

Well done ⭐ 🌟 👍

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Just realise this isn't clear - I mean change "I knew him" to "I know him" (I don't actually know him, although he sounds interesting so I wish I did!)

Bo Wang is a visiting researcher at Turing and work with Professor Terry Lyons based at Oxford.
I knew him because he is one of the organizers for Data science for mental health, an interest group aiming
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I recommend you change the following:
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patients. His work is very meaningful and helps many depressive patients to start a new life without the risk of
suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
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suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
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investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
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believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus it could be useful to apply

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optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus could be useful to apply
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this surgery to all patients who have strong suicidal urges. I really love his ideas and hope he can move this


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I knew him because he is one of the organizers for Data science for mental health, an interest group aiming
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@sparkler0323 - why are some of these reviews marked resolved when they aren't updated yet?

Please also update from master because I've fixed the Travis continuous integration and so it will now actually tell you something useful (rather than break all the time)!

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Thanks Georgia, your review is super helpful and I have fixed the grammatical mistakes based on them!

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@sparkler0323 - I can only see a couple of sentences on separate lines - can you please go through the blog post and put them all on separate lines for me to review?

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Hi @sparkler0323! I've fixed the broken links in the master branch - please can you update your branch so that CI passes?

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Ang, this is excellent!! I really enjoyed reading it, and I hadn't realised there were all these fascinating people at the Turing. Your blog post helped me find out there was someone else you work with who has a background in autism research, which is cool to know!

Sorry for my very pernickety comments. They are very minor. Just correcting some grammar and spelling. The main one is when you use 'the' and 'a' or 'an' - in general, I'd use 'the' in front of any noun, when you expect the reader to know exactly what you are referring to (even if only by context), e.g. "the Turing Institute" or "the University of Cambridge", and "a" in front of any other noun beginning with a consonant, and "an" for ones beginning with a vowel. There are some exceptions, but this holds most of the time. English can be so totally erratic - your blog is actually very well written and clear so just a few minor points to make it perfect!

Well done ⭐ 🌟 👍

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Just realise this isn't clear - I mean change "I knew him" to "I know him" (I don't actually know him, although he sounds interesting so I wish I did!)

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I recommend you change the following:
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patients. His work is very meaningful and helps many depressive patients to start a new life without the risk of
suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
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suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
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investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
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believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus it could be useful to apply

cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus could be useful to apply
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this surgery to all patients who have strong suicidal urges. I really love his ideas and hope he can move this


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I knew him because he is one of the organizers for Data science for mental health, an interest group aiming
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suicide. However, some of the patients tend to respond more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further

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@sparkler0323 - why are some of these reviews marked resolved when they aren't updated yet?

Please also update from master because I've fixed the Travis continuous integration and so it will now actually tell you something useful (rather than break all the time)!

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@KirstieJane So sorry, as I couldn't find out how to make an edit inside this pull request. Should I close this pull request and re-edit it in my Github?

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Hi @sparkler0323 - if you make changes in your repository's master branch the pull request will automatically update ✨ Ping @GeorgiaHCA or @minnieho1115 in the slack channel if you're having any difficulties 😄

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Thanks Georgia, your review is super helpful and I have fixed the grammatical mistakes based on them!

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Well done! 🚀

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@sparkler0323 - I can only see a couple of sentences on separate lines - can you please go through the blog post and put them all on separate lines for me to review?

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Hi @sparkler0323! I've fixed the broken links in the master branch - please can you update your branch so that CI passes?

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Pinging again - I'd like to get this blog post merged - its been open for 2 months.

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Hi @sparkler0323! If you click on the "Details" link next to the Travis CI you can see what the error is - in this case its that it's a broken link in a different blog post - I can fix that 😄

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Ang, this is excellent!! I really enjoyed reading it, and I hadn't realised there were all these fascinating people at the Turing. Your blog post helped me find out there was someone else you work with who has a background in autism research, which is cool to know!

Sorry for my very pernickety comments. They are very minor. Just correcting some grammar and spelling. The main one is when you use 'the' and 'a' or 'an' - in general, I'd use 'the' in front of any noun, when you expect the reader to know exactly what you are referring to (even if only by context), e.g. "the Turing Institute" or "the University of Cambridge", and "a" in front of any other noun beginning with a consonant, and "an" for ones beginning with a vowel. There are some exceptions, but this holds most of the time. English can be so totally erratic - your blog is actually very well written and clear so just a few minor points to make it perfect!

Well done ⭐ 🌟 👍

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Just realise this isn't clear - I mean change "I knew him" to "I know him" (I don't actually know him, although he sounds interesting so I wish I did!)

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I recommend you change the following:
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patients. His work is very meaningful and helps many depressive patients to start a new life without the risk of
suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
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suicide. However, some of the patients tend to responde more to this surgery, which motiviated Anujan to further
investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
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investigate this heterogeneity and thus pursue a PhD degree at University of Cambridge. He's project here is pretty
cool and aims to identify some depression patients who could be most likely to respond for this surgery and find the
optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
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believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus it could be useful to apply

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optimal surgery target for each individual, which involving neurosurgery, neuroimaging and machine learning. He also
believes that the curcuit of this surgery targets is a transdiagnostic biomarker, and thus could be useful to apply
this surgery for all patients who had a strong desire of suicide. I really love his ideas and hope he can move this

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this surgery to all patients who have strong suicidal urges. I really love his ideas and hope he can move this


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@sparkler0323 - why are some of these reviews marked resolved when they aren't updated yet?

Please also update from master because I've fixed the Travis continuous integration and so it will now actually tell you something useful (rather than break all the time)!

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@KirstieJane So sorry, as I couldn't find out how to make an edit inside this pull request. Should I close this pull request and re-edit it in my Github?

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Hi @sparkler0323 - if you make changes in your repository's master branch the pull request will automatically update ✨ Ping @GeorgiaHCA or @minnieho1115 in the slack channel if you're having any difficulties 😄

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Thanks Georgia, your review is super helpful and I have fixed the grammatical mistakes based on them!

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FIx them ~

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Well done! 🚀

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@sparkler0323 - I can only see a couple of sentences on separate lines - can you please go through the blog post and put them all on separate lines for me to review?

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Hi @sparkler0323! I've fixed the broken links in the master branch - please can you update your branch so that CI passes?

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Pinging again - I'd like to get this blog post merged - its been open for 2 months.

Let me know if you have any questions about updating the branch @sparkler0323.

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Hi @KirstieJane, it will be great if you can help me the error. I have updated your master to my Github repository and I'm not sure why the merge fails. Thanks for your time!

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Hi @sparkler0323! If you click on the "Details" link next to the Travis CI you can see what the error is - in this case its that it's a broken link in a different blog post - I can fix that 😄

Thank you! I'll review over the weekend ✨

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